I have a hard time believing an editor ever looked at it
Wouldn't an editor tell him to identify the party that would be taking those actions, not to write in second person, etc.?
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- More crappy writing from Brian Hamilton -
Mike,
2010-02-04, 08:06
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- He's the prototype for "not getting it." - domer.mq, 2010-02-04, 08:47
- I don't even understand the jab he's going for
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Jay,
2010-02-04, 08:26
- seriously -- I've read it half a dozen times now -
Jay,
2010-02-04, 08:35
- I have a hard time believing an editor ever looked at it - Mike, 2010-02-04, 08:52
- Kelly talked about how 2 months - JRT, 2010-02-04, 08:40
- I think what he's saying -
Greg,
2010-02-04, 08:37
- yeah -
Jay,
2010-02-04, 08:38
- Noone has confused Hamilton with a good writer, but... - Greg, 2010-02-04, 08:44
- yeah -
Jay,
2010-02-04, 08:38
- Excuse me, stewardess, I speak self-righteous prick -
MadisonDomer,
2010-02-04, 08:34
- not sure that's it -- see Greg above -
Jay,
2010-02-04, 08:38
- I'll admit, I was guessing but my subject heading was better - MadisonDomer, 2010-02-04, 08:52
- not sure that's it -- see Greg above
- seriously -- I've read it half a dozen times now -
Jay,
2010-02-04, 08:35
- I agree with SlainteJoe - Pat, 2010-02-04, 08:25